Friday, September 27, 2013

UNWIND in the graveyard

they where greted by a man that looks like he has the lips of an unwind. many rumers go around the gravyard about hem. this man ows the  graveyard. they call hem mister. he made the graveyard as a place where unwinds can go until they are 18 and are given 200 dollares and leve and the goverment dosnt know about it. i think that they will be cought  and all the unwinds there will be cought also.

1 comment:

  1. Armon, you need to pay close attention to editing. All sentences should begin with a capital letter and use spell check before publishing-- it will help you find the spelling errors :)

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