Friday, September 27, 2013

UNWIND the graveyard

well they where in an abandoned air port hanger and they where there for five days and then an air plane had came and they where all put in crates  it was three of them in each crate it was to crowded  so one box had four people in it. they where all in and they where all questioning where they where going many of them said they where going to a harvest camp. then when the plane stop ed they where all greeted by a mistereas man . then the next chapters named the graveyard. i think that he makes them work tell they are old enough to not be unwound which is 18.

1 comment:

  1. Great summary and at the end you began to explain why a character acts the way that he does. Well done !

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