In this book bethiny hammolton was attacked by a shark when she was practincing for a tornument then she lost like half of her blood whall she was swiming back to shor. she then had to be rushed to the emergency room and had to get to sugerys. she was biten right below her lefvt sholoder. thye shark that had biten her was 15 foot tiger shark. it was vary silent under the water and had made no sound ass it had biten her. after all the surgery she had tryed to rebuild her life. she was still trying to surf. now every thing was alot mor difficult that she only had one arm.even tghought she had one arm she still got fifth in a surfing contest.
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